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Daffodils

Wet dry daffodils Deeply rooted in water Sunken by full drought (This is my first attempt at Haiku, I hope you like it)

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Date: 11/1/2016 1:53:00 AM
A very well written haiku, I must say.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 11/2/2016 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Afzal.
Date: 10/28/2016 9:35:00 PM
what a contrast this is!! Very interesting one. I like that.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/30/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, glad you liked it!
Date: 10/28/2016 9:13:00 AM
There is a real deepness here between the wet and dry...well constructed
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/30/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Tim, very much appreciated.

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