Daffodils

Wet dry daffodils
           Deeply rooted in water
           Sunken by full drought



(This is my first attempt at Haiku, I hope you like it)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nusker Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 1:53 AM
A very well written haiku, I must say.
Ogundare Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Thanks Afzal.
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 9:35 PM
what a contrast this is!! Very interesting one. I like that.
Ogundare Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thanks Andrea, glad you liked it!
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 9:13 AM
There is a real deepness here between the wet and dry...well constructed
Ogundare Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Thanks Tim, very much appreciated.
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