Daffodil's

She doesn't mind the great length
Or the girth of it
Bushes without leaves
Are not green as he kisses it

The woods are not deep
Without trees that are seen
While the path that she walks
He chose in her dream

Stopping she dropped what it was
That he picked
A daffodil that bleeds white sap
If too hard it is picked
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mclain Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 6:21 PM
I had to dig through my poems to find this one. I thought to myself it was a decent poem, but no one ever left a comment, so I thank you. If you have a favorite topic for a poem just let me know and I will whip one up for you, o.k. , Just let me know. Your friend in grace, James.
Delaney Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:41 PM
I can’t believe nobody has commented. I for one love your writing.SuZ
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