Daffodills Lead the Way

See the yellow daffodil majorettes? First ones to every practice Urging the flower parade

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/28/2018 4:57:00 PM

Terrific!! Enter this one in the Not-Rose-Bowl Parade contest. It's a surefire winner. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/28/2018 11:03:00 PM

Hahaha. Thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2018 1:27:00 PM

such a beautiful uplifting poem Caren, I love to see daffodils they are so cheery and bright - bring on that flower parade... i just wish it lasted a little longer!:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/27/2018 8:21:00 AM

Beautiful uplifting poem. Charming. I love the personification of the daffodils marching with pomp and pride.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 10:59:00 AM

Line, I hope that you have daffodils, because I fear I don't, but I am going to run out and get some in a week or two.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2018 5:44:00 AM

Good work. They do seem to lead the way into spring and then summer gardens. Thanks for dropping by. The poem Death was about my husband's aunt. She lived into her nineties. She kept a clear mind up to nearly the end. Sara

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 11:00:00 AM

I had a great-aunt who lived in her own house and did what she needed to do for herself, which was everything until she was 106, so I truly do understand. Thanks for visiting, Sara.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2018 4:47:00 AM

Love to see them Caren, good weather on the way. Tom

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 11:00:00 AM

I am so ready for them, Tom. I saw one yesterday, and bam! A poem!