Daffodills Lead the Way

See the yellow daffodil majorettes?

First ones to every practice

Urging the flower parade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Terrific!! Enter this one in the Not-Rose-Bowl Parade contest. It's a surefire winner. :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Hahaha. Thanks.
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 1:27 PM
such a beautiful uplifting poem Caren, I love to see daffodils they are so cheery and bright - bring on that flower parade... i just wish it lasted a little longer!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Beautiful uplifting poem. Charming. I love the personification of the daffodils marching with pomp and pride.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Line, I hope that you have daffodils, because I fear I don't, but I am going to run out and get some in a week or two.
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Good work. They do seem to lead the way into spring and then summer gardens. Thanks for dropping by. The poem Death was about my husband's aunt. She lived into her nineties. She kept a clear mind up to nearly the end. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 11:00 AM
I had a great-aunt who lived in her own house and did what she needed to do for herself, which was everything until she was 106, so I truly do understand. Thanks for visiting, Sara.
Cunningham Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Love to see them Caren, good weather on the way. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 11:00 AM
I am so ready for them, Tom. I saw one yesterday, and bam! A poem!
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