David William Breidenthal Poet Haiku

Daffodil Dreams

(triple haikus) 

Marry-go-round time
With fam’ly and friends ‘round me
Floatin’ daffodils 

Nightmares come and go
Bottom my top feelings – yes?
Hopes are up, now down 

Fell in a blue hole
Like Alice in Wonderland
Except, I spin ‘round

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Anand Parmale April 3, 2016 at 6:58 AM Beautiful write my friend!!! David William Breidenthal April 4, 2016 at 11:05 PM :) Thank you! I think you are a great individual just by mere assumption!

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