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Daffodil Dreams

(triple haikus) Marry-go-round time With fam’ly and friends ‘round me Floatin’ daffodils Nightmares come and go Bottom my top feelings – yes? Hopes are up, now down Fell in a blue hole Like Alice in Wonderland Except, I spin ‘round

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Anand Parmale

Date: 4/3/2016 6:58:00 AM

Beautiful write my friend!!!

J.W. Earnings
Date: 4/4/2016 11:05:00 PM

:) Thank you! I think you are a great individual just by mere assumption!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2016 3:36:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visits to my page..It was delightful to see you there..Sara

J.W. Earnings
Date: 4/1/2016 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Sara Kendrick! :) I will make sure to visit more of your work, I promise. I have been super busy at home as of lately; but as soon I get more freetime, I will visit lots of your writings and comment on each of them.