Daffodil

Daffodils surround 
my scent dipped into your soul  
amber streaks of love
electrify my sky
with you I'm alive
with you by my side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Teagan Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:27 AM
"amber streaks of love electrify my sky" I love that! very nice love poem.
Chaudhary Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Very beautiful poem. Nice words.... Thanks for commenting on my poem. Have a wonderful day :)
Talbot Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 4:26 AM
Inspirational, wait and see!
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 5:38 PM
what beautiful romantic lines Raw especially like the amber streaks of love:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Intriguing romance in these lines, great poem!
Cresswell Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 3:27 PM
A very passionate declaration of love. Well done!
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