Daddy Was a Good Man

Daddy was a good man
staying home for a few months
then leaving and disappearing
going out to make money
taking poor lil sis with him
Daddy was a good man
playing mama's feelings
using her stuff to his advantage
leaving her one deep
to raise four kids
Daddy was a good man
I never remember a birthday
with him there
holidays were rare enough
school recitals was a waste of breathe
Daddy was a good man
he made me who I am today
determined to be a good parent
and the best I could significant other
to be somebody
Daddy was a good man
he showed me all the wrong ways
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 1:11 PM
My dad was somewhat like this, but due to his mental illness, so I can forgive it. I really liked how you turned a negative into a positive.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your win Olivia love , all the best for the New Year xx
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December 25, 2012 at 8:55 PM
Olivia, ;-) Congratulations with your little Christmas win... have a nice one... always~ PD
Zungu Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 11:14 PM
R Kelly once said" any man can make a baby but it takes a real man to be a father" I share your sentiments in this one Olivia
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