Daddy Claus

That hinge always squeaked
That floor always creaked
So Santa Claus never could slink
I’d know he was there
He’d ruffle my hair
And then he would leave with a wink

One Christmas he said
As I sat up in bed
‘Don’t let your mum know you saw me’
That was our secret
He knew I would keep it
’twas Dad dressed as Santa before me

On that Christmas Day
Mum said ‘We should pray,’
Then, ‘Son, you will need to be brave,
I’ll hold your hand
And we’ll go as we planned
To lay flowers on Daddy’s grave.’



18 December 2021
Contest: Paranormal Poetry
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 1:23 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Did not see the ending coming. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
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December 23, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Hello Terry ... well written, and the jolt to finish struck me - well done Terry - Lindsay
Flood Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 3:10 AM
Glad it hit home, Lindsay. Have a great Christmas. Terry
Awtry Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:22 PM
I agree that this was a bit of a tear jerker, but not overly so. I enjoyed reading it. :) -ps
Flood Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 1:07 AM
Thanks PS, in Hollywood, Daddy dying is the sad bit and coming back as a ghost is the happy ending. Unfortunately in a short poem doing things in that order is rather predictable. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Wolf Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Doctors today ought to be able to claw him back to life... ~ Grisly Reaper
Flood Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 1:08 AM
In the UK, Gershon, ‘Hunt the doctor’ is the latest party game. It can be a job to locate one these days. ;-) Terry
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 1:46 PM
A bit of a tear jerker,,, am more used to your witty writes. hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 3:16 PM
I pondered the sad ending for a while, Jan, because I’m aware that many people anticipate ‘light’ from me, so ‘dark’ can be a slap round the chops. Decided I’d leave it as is until or unless I come up with some other paranormal offering. Terry
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December 19, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Enjoyed your paranormal story Terry. Good luck in the contest Tom
Flood Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Thanks, Tom. Considered cheering it up but I felt it worked as it was. Terry
Hankins Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 9:05 AM
This one is marvelous, Terry, but a bit of a tear jerker. I loved it.
Flood Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Milt. Sorry no humour in this one. Terry
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