Daddy

Come Home daddy come home I'm missing you already daddy I need you daddy I love you daddy please come home daddy tell me your alright tell me if your okay I cant take it anymore daddy I need you I need you the most write now I cant Cary this pain I'm calling you and telling you to come home mamma's going crazy mamma's hurt daddy please come home tell me what's going on why you doing this? TELL ME OH, daddy please come home OH, daddy, daddy, daddy please come home Copyright ©2008 Marissa Stoops

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2009 8:11:00 AM

I feel your pain. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2009 9:50:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marissa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol