Dad the Redeemer

It sounded like an intimate pamper,
which none could decipher at first..
He adored me all day without the slightest hint of slumber,
merrily relinquishing to my thirst..
The thirst to know what life has in store,
to understand the world to its deepest core..



The world was really massive indeed,
but to him I was the world..
Shielding me gallantly from the perverted stampede,
sans an armour but with his heart of gold..



Eccentric i may have ever been,
In his heart he had the most room for me..
His dark complexion others might have seen,
but i knew the inside was impeccable for as far as i could see..



From imploding black holes to baking bun,
you enlightened me about everything under the sun..
Reprieving me of the mistakes that engulf,
while i was still discovering myself..



Every time i let you down,
surfing the aggressive tides of rebellion..
I knew i didn't deserve the crown,
with me so malevolent as a vicious stallion..



I owe you something beyond words,
that even infinite love can't make it square..
Dad I'll always love you in fathomless depth,
and make you proud till my last breath..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/22/2010 10:27:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ajay. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2010 3:02:00 PM
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