Dad, Haiku Triplet

Sea foam wash my feet:
Let me sink into the earth
My heels then my toes

Gentle breeze kiss me
So I may feel your majesty,
Whisper in my ear

He rests on a stone
Awaiting to join the sea-
I love you Dad
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September 1, 2017 at 8:08 AM
I edited a previous Haiku triplet to reflect a moment in time
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