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Dad Brought

DAD BROUGHT me valentine candy in the little heart-shaped box me a glitzy pen when i was home sick me and all of us security me and my siblings love of mom it his stories: work and submarine his heart his tears it his quiet ways his appetite his woes his smile all of it 4/25/2023

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 5/2/2023 6:41:00 PM

As a father who absolutely cherishes his one and only daughter this brings both a smile and a tear beautiful just simply beautiful! A.S.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 2:44:00 PM

Thank you so much! <3

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/2/2023 2:21:00 PM

A great list Kim, you had a bejwellecd it’s father and his colorful essence sparkles in your poetry. Pangie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 2:44:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie! I sure love my dad and miss my mom. Blessings, dear one!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2023 7:32:00 PM

O, that I would get something even remotely resembling this from one of my precious jewels. Beautiful list, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 4:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2023 9:33:00 AM

A wonderful tribute/write to dad. It would make a great card for June. Have a great/blessed day............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 11:19:00 AM

Perhaps :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/26/2023 8:34:00 AM

Nothing better than a REAL dad. Im smiling, Kim:) Obviously a daddy's girl:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 8:49:00 AM

I think I’ve become that. We’ve grown a lot closer since mom died. God bless you, Daniel!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/26/2023 7:30:00 AM

Aww Kim that is so lovely. So many things you mentioned remind me of my won Dad What a beautiful Tribute to a much loved man. Sincere thanks for posting this . Best wishes from Wendy