Dad Brought

DAD BROUGHT

me valentine candy in the little heart-shaped box

me a glitzy pen when i was home sick

me and all of us security

me and my siblings love of mom

it

his stories: work and submarine

his heart

his tears

it

his quiet ways

his appetite

his woes

his smile

all of it

4/25/2023
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Date: 5/2/2023 6:41:00 PM
As a father who absolutely cherishes his one and only daughter this brings both a smile and a tear beautiful just simply beautiful! A.S.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much! <3
Date: 5/2/2023 2:21:00 PM
A great list Kim, you had a bejwellecd it’s father and his colorful essence sparkles in your poetry. Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie! I sure love my dad and miss my mom. Blessings, dear one!
Date: 4/27/2023 7:32:00 PM
O, that I would get something even remotely resembling this from one of my precious jewels. Beautiful list, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon!
Date: 4/26/2023 9:33:00 AM
A wonderful tribute/write to dad. It would make a great card for June. Have a great/blessed day............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 11:19:00 AM
Perhaps :)
Date: 4/26/2023 8:34:00 AM
Nothing better than a REAL dad. Im smiling, Kim:) Obviously a daddy's girl:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 8:49:00 AM
I think I’ve become that. We’ve grown a lot closer since mom died. God bless you, Daniel!
Date: 4/26/2023 7:30:00 AM
Aww Kim that is so lovely. So many things you mentioned remind me of my won Dad What a beautiful Tribute to a much loved man. Sincere thanks for posting this . Best wishes from Wendy
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Date: 4/26/2023 7:26:00 AM
What a great tribute to dad Kim! I love how you crafted this one. What a great litany of memories! Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet poet! :)
Date: 4/26/2023 5:49:00 AM
Your dad is a man to be proud of, Kim. In spite of all he has to go through in life, he is always there for you and family. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 8:50:00 AM
Yes he is! Never knew he was so compassionate. A wonderful dad who really truly loved my mother. God bless!
Date: 4/26/2023 1:41:00 AM
Your dad is often in my thoughts. Hope he has stopped grieving.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, dearest friend. He is doing much better. Hugs to you. I think of you too, Victor.
Date: 4/25/2023 9:41:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your dad, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 5:37:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2023 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna!
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