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Dad

I hate you, Dad, for what you did to me when I was just a child, A helpless thing whom you could beat until the excess anger was drained. To me, when I was just a child, You were God unmerciful, until the excess anger was drained And you were once again my friend. You were God unmerciful, And I was Satan, Lord of hell. A helpless thing that you could beat, until you curdled my love. [This was written as a child- I was 12 years old. I don't hate my dad though. Those were just the feelings at the time i wrote this]

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Date: 12/29/2010 2:51:00 PM
you have some real and strong point in your writing my friend well done thank you for sharing
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