Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Senryu

dad

                                     dad heaves up the child
                   
                         with stretched hands dreaming for the~

                                     higher stance than his.

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Daith Kumar Naik Banoth March 26, 2026 at 6:17 PM Teacher heaves up the students with stretched hands dreaming for the~ higher stance than his Only two words have changed, But the responsibility and the respect, stays the same.

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen November 28, 2024 at 2:33 AM Indeed great write dad’s are awesome many blessings Patri Venkata Ramana December 6, 2024 at 11:50 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Hilda Greenhough November 9, 2024 at 6:05 PM I liked this heartfelt, loving poem of a parent's dreams. Patri Venkata Ramana November 14, 2024 at 7:32 PM Thank you so much.