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Cycles

cycles of pitiful emotions do we know the minds of the hurt and lost euphoric melancholy for some a look into the minds of the so called brave is it criminal or insanity the broken arrow that wields the bondage of the meek couragous is none cross the borders of weekness and weild your own sword cut the cord that binds you and follow none but thy own heart and soal find your heirophant

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Date: 10/25/2008 11:26:00 AM
I read all your work... CYCLES I liked the best as it seemed like a departure from the others and encompassed a broader sense. The line quoted below is full of outside imagery which floods into it from the reader.............................
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Date: 10/25/2008 11:24:00 AM
the broken arrow that wields the bondage of the meek couragous is none A GREAT LINE CHRISTINA... you have talent, keep writing. Thank you for your comment, have to say all true... no denial.. not any more keep writing I hope I see more here soon col13x
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