'cycle of Life'

raindrops breathing new life into parched land cycle of life continues cradle the little things
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Falotico Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 7:24 AM
Well you know the "rain" line caught my eye and brought me to another gem from your fingertips....Hope your Saturday is a happy oen...with love Michael
K. Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 11:29 AM
this is beautiful, Missy-- really love how the raindrops give life and of how you used "cradle" to also denote birth-- awesome kimo (I think I have to try this form soon) and heehee is it just me or are you getting a page from my book with those numbers? ;) awesome that you are also putting in the date and time, makes for better tracking of poems actually (well that's what I think) mwahugs to you :)
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 9:21 AM
Nice Kimo with a wonderful message...enjoyed.
Horne Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Lovely kimo, Wilma. I absolutely love rain, especially when the garden is looking parched as you describe so well
Song Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 7:22 AM
The beautiful little things are completely dependent on the designer's raindrops! This is a beautiful kimo- Sponsor a kimo contest to give me a chance to do my first write! :) Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:58 PM
wow,the last line really clinches it, Wilma. Great kimo!!
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:32 PM
fantastic and stunning images , Wilma
Rhinem Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:16 AM
Smile ~ Pleasant reflection as jewel perhaps to extended to anothers hand ~ Although, as for myself, tis not the small, yet, the Great I Seek.... ~ And yesss, condrads upon Your Lovely Lights, one year Ann. ~ Sooo Sweeet ~ Love, John!:) ~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:03 AM
such beautiful words Wilma giving food for thought as rain is food for leaves and land luv.. luv the cradle line .. so sweet as u my friend..
Hendricks Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 8:54 AM
How do you come up with these pearls of wisdom, homegirl? Nice one. Keep snug in this miserable weather. ^__^
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June 1, 2011 at 6:06 AM
this is awesome.. cory
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