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Cycle of Life

At the Kruger National Park, an elephant carcass, predators dine at same time, Lions and vultures devouring their foul find, a scorching sun, predator’s clime. ‘CLIME’ means a region with reference to its climate – Kruger park mostly hot, sometimes scorching Entering Contest: YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET Sponsor; L Milton Hawkins Date; 26/09/2022

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Date: 10/30/2021 10:20:00 PM
Nice rhyming couplet. Just two lines but expressed a lot. God bless you.
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Date: 10/8/2021 11:34:00 AM
It’s a fact of life animals kill to survive, sad but true. A good rhyming couplet Jennifer… Belle
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Date: 10/6/2021 11:10:00 AM
Hi Jenny, I echo what Victor said. You said so much in a few words. Great job-Alexis
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Date: 9/30/2021 11:10:00 AM
This poem says so much in a few words, Jennifer. Sad, but true. So well done! Hugs, Evelyn :)
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Date: 9/29/2021 6:52:00 AM
You have described a sad sight. Hope the elephant died a natural death.
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Date: 9/27/2021 5:01:00 AM
very well described here, my friend
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Date: 9/27/2021 2:51:00 AM
You captured the scene well Jennifer, sad but that's nature, everything has to eat to survive. Tom
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Date: 9/26/2021 11:08:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, in the animal world this is the cycle of life. Hugs.
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Date: 9/26/2021 10:46:00 AM
This is REALLY good one!!! It captures so much in so few lines.
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