Cycle of Life

At the Kruger National Park, an elephant carcass, predators dine at same time,
Lions and vultures devouring their foul find, a scorching sun, predator’s clime.




‘CLIME’ means a region with reference to its climate – Kruger park mostly hot, sometimes scorching

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Roy Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 10:20 PM
Nice rhyming couplet. Just two lines but expressed a lot. God bless you.
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October 8, 2021 at 11:34 AM
It’s a fact of life animals kill to survive, sad but true. A good rhyming couplet Jennifer… Belle
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Hi Jenny, I echo what Victor said. You said so much in a few words. Great job-Alexis
Buehler Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 11:10 AM
This poem says so much in a few words, Jennifer. Sad, but true. So well done! Hugs, Evelyn :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 6:52 AM
You have described a sad sight. Hope the elephant died a natural death.
Horne Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 5:01 AM
very well described here, my friend
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 2:51 AM
You captured the scene well Jennifer, sad but that's nature, everything has to eat to survive. Tom
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September 26, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Hello Jennifer, in the animal world this is the cycle of life. Hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:46 AM
This is REALLY good one!!! It captures so much in so few lines.
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