Cycle

Hopefully I'll die
By ultimate sacrifice;
A promise through death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 21, 2012 at 5:08 PM
great write Jewel,deep
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September 13, 2012 at 10:29 PM
Hopefully, the part of you that hurts will die and bring renewal to your being...you touch the reader with your pain. Be blessed. Joy Wells
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