Cyberspace

I wonder where messages go,
like travellers lost in the snow,
all night and all day, 
they're sent and they stray, 
so did you just get my hello?

written 7th May for Brian's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 9:38 PM
so cute, jack,
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Good one. Some do get lost but it is mostly human error. Reads like a good one to enter in the contest. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Bauer Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:56 PM
ha! i always wonder the same thing, jack! well done...
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 4:39 PM
To me it will always be a mystery how air waves occur, and how messages 'find their way'. Even sending this message is quite beyond me!! ~ Regards // paul
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