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Cyber Cheater

Cyber Cheater You are my cheating heart. Passing me by from the start. I feel desolate and broken in two. Scarred for life, my heart hangs askew… What have I done for you to leave? I thought you loved me I wanted to believe.. I drift into hopelessness, feeling empty inside. I take on my life in a dismal stride… Longing, seeking; where do I stand? Wondering and walking in the mind’s wasteland. Do you still want me or that someone other? The one that steals love, that one the shyster? My heart was owned once upon a history.. Completely, absolute, in sublime stupidity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/19/2010 2:43:00 PM
The rhyming sequence is excellent. I also like the use of the rhetorical questions to spark the reader along. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/18/2010 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Erin. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:35:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations to a talented poet. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:39:00 PM
Congrats Erin on your featured write "Cyber Cheater." Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:03:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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