Cutting Rivers

Tops of rivers shimmer
Slowly cutting through the eden landscape
Like a samurai on a hill top
Simulating slow motion combat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 24, 2013 at 6:10 PM
So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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January 10, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Rory, ... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.
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January 10, 2012 at 12:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this afternoon Rory. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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