Cutlery

CUTLERY

Layed with military precision
glory gleaming on starched white
anticipating cuisine- their noble plight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:11 AM
I, too, have a fondness for writing about mundane objects, that actually aren't mundane at all if you look close enough, and you gave the cutlery life. Great job!
Van Breda Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read my first attempt at what they call 'Haiku'-- great style for mundane objects :).. I love your poem 'Radio'-- reminds me of our recent trip from Memphis back to Houston Texas-- 10 hours of radio, and changing stations to fit in with the different frequency..
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 7:19 AM
Kim, well done !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Cogan Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:49 AM
I like this haiku - very good imagery. Thanks for sharing. Shane
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April 15, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Good morning Kim, deep imagery in your haiku... always~ Linda
Tacito Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Sharp and lives up to the title. I quite like this!
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