Kim Rodrigues Poet Couplet

Cute Christmas Couplet

Chased down, Santa’s sled leaves skid marks on the ledge of North Pole.
Sacks in hand, green elves turn Christmas red - punishment shoveling coal.


12/18/2018
Cute Christmas Couplet Poetry Contest/Andrea Dietrich

*Green - New employees

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Subimal Sinha-Roy December 26, 2018 at 10:10 AM Congrats on your win with the cute couplet, Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2018 at 1:10 PM - Congratulations Kim, on your fourth prize, glory in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues December 26, 2018 at 5:58 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Carolyn Devonshire December 24, 2018 at 9:56 PM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest. Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Carolyn Kim Rodrigues December 26, 2018 at 5:58 AM Thank you! Tired...but yes, enjoying! Merry Christmas!

Jan Allison December 24, 2018 at 6:01 PM great dark humour Kim, many congrtas on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues December 24, 2018 at 8:26 PM Thank you, Jan <3 Kim

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2018 at 5:15 PM I liked the dark humor in this one, Kim. Thanks for participating in my contest and Congrats for your win. Kim Rodrigues December 24, 2018 at 8:26 PM Thank you, Andrea! <3 Kim

Carolyn Devonshire December 19, 2018 at 7:37 AM This can happen with new elves, Kim. Hate to think of them getting coal in their stockings, but this is a very cute couplet that Andrea is sure to like. Best wishes in her contest! Carolyn Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2018 at 7:47 AM I think Santa will have mercy on them :)

Mike Gentile December 18, 2018 at 1:56 PM Indeed, it is cute, Kim, Good one xxoo Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2018 at 7:47 AM Thank you, Mike!

Caren Krutsinger December 18, 2018 at 11:14 AM I am so ready to run up there and rescue them; a mere mistake,Kim. Nothing more. Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2018 at 1:13 PM LOL! Santa’s too hard on the rookies, eh?! Perhaps he’ll let them rest with extra nice cookies and hot cocoa. Love your heart, my dear friend!

Heidi Sands December 18, 2018 at 10:51 AM Oh my, shoveling the coal. Well done Kim :) Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2018 at 1:13 PM Thanks, Heidi!

M. L. Kiser December 18, 2018 at 10:19 AM Ooh, those poor elves. Cute one. Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2018 at 1:13 PM I wonder if he chastised them with a twinkle in his eye. Perhaps his mercy will come through ;)