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Cute Christmas Couplet

Chased down, Santa’s sled leaves skid marks on the ledge of North Pole. Sacks in hand, green elves turn Christmas red - punishment shoveling coal. 12/18/2018 Cute Christmas Couplet Poetry Contest/Andrea Dietrich *Green - New employees

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Date: 12/26/2018 10:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win with the cute couplet, Kim.
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Date: 12/25/2018 1:10:00 PM
- Congratulations Kim, on your fourth prize, glory in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 12/24/2018 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest. Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 5:58:00 AM
Thank you! Tired...but yes, enjoying! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/24/2018 6:01:00 PM
great dark humour Kim, many congrtas on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2018 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Jan <3 Kim
Date: 12/24/2018 5:15:00 PM
I liked the dark humor in this one, Kim. Thanks for participating in my contest and Congrats for your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2018 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! <3 Kim
Date: 12/19/2018 7:37:00 AM
This can happen with new elves, Kim. Hate to think of them getting coal in their stockings, but this is a very cute couplet that Andrea is sure to like. Best wishes in her contest! Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2018 7:47:00 AM
I think Santa will have mercy on them :)
Date: 12/18/2018 1:56:00 PM
Indeed, it is cute, Kim, Good one xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 12/18/2018 11:14:00 AM
I am so ready to run up there and rescue them; a mere mistake,Kim. Nothing more.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2018 1:13:00 PM
LOL! Santa’s too hard on the rookies, eh?! Perhaps he’ll let them rest with extra nice cookies and hot cocoa. Love your heart, my dear friend!
Date: 12/18/2018 10:51:00 AM
Oh my, shoveling the coal. Well done Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 12/18/2018 10:19:00 AM
Ooh, those poor elves. Cute one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2018 1:13:00 PM
I wonder if he chastised them with a twinkle in his eye. Perhaps his mercy will come through ;)

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