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Cute Christmas Couplet

Alas, there'll be no goodies for Billy this year due to a bit of bad luck; Due to Santa's ponderous butt, sliding down the chimney he got stuck! Entry for Andrea Dietrich's "Cute Christmas Couplet" Contest (17 December 2018)

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Date: 1/5/2019 9:07:00 AM
Santa needs to go on a diet, can't be disappointing children again next year.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/5/2019 11:09:00 AM
Yep, he's got a serious problem. Line, thank you so much for your gracious comments on some of my "concoctions". Much appreciated - Bob
Date: 12/19/2018 6:01:00 PM
G'day Robert … I'm sure if Billy lit a small fire, Santa would shoot up like a rocket, but maybe Billy doesn't think like me - thanks Robert - Lindsay
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:39:00 AM
santa needs a veggie diet, hohoho!... i love your humor, bob!...huggs
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Date: 12/18/2018 1:53:00 AM
LOL this is so funny!!!!!
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Date: 12/17/2018 6:42:00 PM
Poor Santa! Poor Billy! Tough luck all around. Well done, Robert.
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Date: 12/17/2018 5:08:00 PM
ha! perfect for the contest, bob! best of luck...
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/17/2018 5:23:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene - tuff break for Billy indeed!
Date: 12/17/2018 4:47:00 PM
Yes he sure needs to diet next year lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:19:00 PM
Great one Robert lol :)
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