Cut

Deep lines drawn gently;
A subtle but growing pain
Rubies fall gently down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 12, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Brian Burnette, wow, the imagery is fantastic. linda
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August 28, 2015 at 7:32 PM
BRIAN, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Lovely expressions with great images, Brian
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June 20, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Three lines, that could be the first sentence in a really good book. Though there's a darkness to this piece, the Rubies symbolize a sense of greater value hidden in these three lines. Write on!
Greenlee Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Wow.What a strong poem.Great job.Have a wonderful day love...
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