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Deep lines drawn gently;
A subtle but growing pain
Rubies fall gently down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 4/12/2016 11:25:00 AM
Brian Burnette, wow, the imagery is fantastic. linda
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Date: 8/28/2015 7:32:00 PM
BRIAN, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 6/20/2011 10:00:00 AM
Lovely expressions with great images, Brian
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:14:00 AM
Three lines, that could be the first sentence in a really good book. Though there's a darkness to this piece, the Rubies symbolize a sense of greater value hidden in these three lines. Write on!
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:37:00 AM
Wow.What a strong poem.Great job.Have a wonderful day love...
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