curtain raiser

petals opening tuning fork humming of bees ~ a curtain raiser Place: 3rd

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/23/2025 12:01:00 PM

Patri, a delightful haiku, congratulations on your winning placement.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/25/2025 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your best compliments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2025 8:26:00 AM

Yes indeed it is!! Congrats here

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/25/2025 10:15:00 PM

Thank you so much for your compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2025 5:42:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Patri :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/23/2025 7:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your best compliments.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/14/2025 12:57:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this haiku. It is wonderful to compare Spring to a theater performance.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/14/2025 7:21:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.