Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

curtain raiser

                                         
                                        petals opening
                              tuning fork humming of bees ~
                                        a curtain raiser

     

                                             Place: 3rd

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Tania Kitchin May 23, 2025 at 12:01 PM Patri, a delightful haiku, congratulations on your winning placement. Patri Venkata Ramana May 25, 2025 at 10:16 PM Thank you so much for your best compliments.

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2025 at 8:26 AM Yes indeed it is!! Congrats here Patri Venkata Ramana May 25, 2025 at 10:15 PM Thank you so much for your compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2025 at 5:42 AM - Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Patri :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs Patri Venkata Ramana May 23, 2025 at 7:10 AM Thank you so much for your best compliments.

Hilda Greenhough May 14, 2025 at 12:57 PM I enjoyed reading this haiku. It is wonderful to compare Spring to a theater performance. Patri Venkata Ramana May 14, 2025 at 7:21 PM Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.