Cursed

Sadly Manipulated angry feelings curse me Chaining me, stalking me Darkness has currpted my soul Save me, enchant me Untaint these words Fool me Saviour.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/24/2012 1:22:00 PM

:) loved this poem spewing with depression...I'm trying not to cry! Great job! -DWB :)

Stacey Brackley
Date: 5/24/2012 2:16:00 PM

I'm glad it made you feel something, even if is a bit negative :) Stacey

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/16/2012 6:21:00 PM

Great language! This one really packs a punch... Well done, Stacey!! Best wishes, Keith

Stacey Brackley
Date: 5/17/2012 6:32:00 AM

Thank you, best wishes to you also.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/9/2012 6:45:00 AM

A nicely cryptic piece, love the use of all those evocative words. Enjoyed.

Stacey Brackley
Date: 4/3/2012 12:51:00 PM

Thank you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 5:27:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Stacey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Stacey Brackley
Date: 4/3/2012 12:52:00 PM

Thank you very much.