Cursed

Sadly
Manipulated angry
feelings curse me
Chaining me, stalking me
Darkness has currpted my soul
Save me, enchant me
Untaint these words
Fool me
Saviour.

sadlyric

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David William Breidenthal

May 24, 2012 at 1:22 PM

:) loved this poem spewing with depression...I'm trying not to cry! Great job! -DWB :)

Stacey Brackley

May 24, 2012 at 2:16 PM

I'm glad it made you feel something, even if is a bit negative :) Stacey

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 16, 2012 at 6:21 PM

Great language! This one really packs a punch... Well done, Stacey!! Best wishes, Keith

Stacey Brackley

May 17, 2012 at 6:32 AM

Thank you, best wishes to you also.

Nick Bagnall

January 9, 2012 at 6:45 AM

A nicely cryptic piece, love the use of all those evocative words. Enjoyed.

Stacey Brackley

April 3, 2012 at 12:51 PM

Thank you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 9, 2012 at 5:27 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Stacey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Stacey Brackley

April 3, 2012 at 12:52 PM

Thank you very much.

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