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Curse At the Sun, Pray For the Rain

The sun stands head held high shimmering of pride People glide so mundane with a consistent stride I look left and right all is the same I curse at the sun and pray for the rain Troops are killed in a foreign land History laughs at the stupidity of man We kick rocks and look to the sky when we asks who’s to blame I curse at the sun over the sands and pray for the rain The minute hand rolls as your life goes Why is everything so typical, who the hell knows? I curse at the sun and pray for the rain I curse at the sun and pray for a change Boredom strikes hard God life is lame

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Date: 5/21/2009 10:12:00 PM
wow this is lovely and deep=]]Tinkbabyy
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Date: 3/11/2009 4:09:00 AM
The last stanza to this piece is wicked..especially the last line ..very strong write.
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Date: 3/10/2009 7:00:00 PM
James I loved the 5th and 6th line of this poem especially - They rock bro - God Bless, MJ
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