Cups of Balmy Time

In the dark I stood hand in hand with you At the laughing polychromatic field Of illusory time with wings of blue Expectant to have your  crimson wounds healed It was I who spoilt the mathematics Enthralled by a pair of jingling pink feet Rendering my sensors problematic Choosing the hilly apples amply sweet At its core were ravens that I didn't know Take my ice in your fire and let me melt So said I and waited for a blue blow But met just stones that in the cottage dwelt It was right that you couldn't forgive my flaws Meanwhile time flew on the wings of white cranes Both of us kept loyal to the love's laws Had time sat intact at that romance lane Nor do I  need to erase the pink pain Some aches seek preservation in white chest I cherish living in the time again Listening to the rain-drop sounds in breast If  I could just turn back the hands of time I'd have burnt myself in your restless flame I'm sure we could have gotten back the rhyme Many knots I couldn't resolve in the game How long will last this pain gnawing at heart Some say you will return at a new dawn Though I see no trace of grace in desert Cups of balmy time for ever are gone ___________________________________________________ October 11, 2019 If only we could turn back the hands of time Poetry Contest : Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 11/10/2019 2:43:00 PM
Hello Probir Gupta, this is a great poem. Lots of regrets in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/18/2019 6:29:00 AM
congratulations on your win, I can relate to this poem, i've read a few from men recently that echo this sentiment, all I can say my friend you are not alone, heartfelt piece well done
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:19:00 AM
My friend, hearty congratulations on your first place win! Your superbly crafted poem sings of the sadness that many have faced in life, and loss-- a subject/theme that has long interested this to this old poet's .. A gem and a fav...
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Date: 10/15/2019 1:39:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win for a wonderful poem. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/14/2019 3:59:00 PM
wonderfully penned....congratulations on your deserved first place win :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 2:57:00 PM
Superbly written Probir...lost in time...Congrats!! on your first place win my friend...excellent!...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:02:00 PM
I must say this is the best poem i have read from your pen.. great lines with some great choice of words, i could feel the regret in this poem and the hunger to turn back the hands of time... simply brilliant... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:15:00 PM
I am delighted, Silent ... Thank you so much for your appreciation of this poem ... Thank you once again for honouring me with the placement ... Unique indeed that a poem with such a placement has failed to get even a single 'like' comment from fellow soupers!...
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