Cumulus In Sky

as swans swim smoothly
                                    on blue water of lack like
                                         cumulus in sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Selfa Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Reminds me of my childhood. :) definitely a 7!
Devnath  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your visit to my page and for your comment. Loved always,bl
A   Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 10:58 PM
BL, I'd never close the year on poetry soup, without saying thank you to all the poets on my favorite list. Wishing you the best this coming year **2016** Happy New Year... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Devnath  Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Thanks my lovely *friend for your wishing me Happy new year. May God bless you from every corners in your life to remain happy with sweet smile. Loved always,bl
Trifiatis Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Excellent, my friend, BLD!
Devnath  Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:26 PM
- 7 !!!!! - sorry :)
Devnath  Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Okay. Thanks my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:25 PM
- A beautiful picture, Bl ! - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Many thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment and credit. Loved always,bl
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Absolutely fabulous imagery BL! :-) hugs Jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Many thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and credit. Loved always,bl
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