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Cul De Sac

a time capsule locks inside my head ~ box of gray matter lined with lead pipe dreams and u bends from a life i led ~ sealed off now until i’m dead This or That, Vol 16 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh Howmanysyllables 2x17 02/27/23

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/8/2023 2:48:00 PM

Pipe bombs & Dangerous Bends

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/11/2023 5:03:00 PM

Very much so it seems David See no evil hear no truth very much the order of the day

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/11/2023 5:03:00 PM

Sometimes it's as much of tale as fairies themselves

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/9/2023 2:27:00 AM

Such is life Christopher, but alas not many want to hear the truth, so unsurprisingly got an N/A, Life is not a fairytale, cheers David

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/2/2023 6:21:00 AM

Your prophetic poetic wit always impresses. xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:34:00 AM

If I can impress Super Mo, then my mission is accomplished, thank you kindly, cheers David

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/28/2023 7:55:00 AM

Oh but this is fabulous :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/28/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Fin, and not far from the truth either, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/28/2023 2:16:00 AM

Never say die. Keep writing.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/28/2023 4:13:00 AM

I’m not calling it a day just yet Victor but some old paths are best left blocked off, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2023 7:25:00 PM

Great job, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/28/2023 1:16:00 AM

Heya Kim great to see you, thanks so much for your comment, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/27/2023 6:05:00 PM

Bet those secrets would make for some great reading David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/28/2023 1:14:00 AM

Perhaps a few off cuts seep into my poems from time to time Tom, but the main parts are truly locked away, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 2/27/2023 3:26:00 PM

Shaped like a neck pillow, but no soft place to lay a head.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/27/2023 3:39:00 PM

Great description Jenna, neck pillows are an expedient gizmo but certainly not a life solution for comfort, cheers David

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/27/2023 2:01:00 PM

The picture of Senorita was there,,, Now it is gone! Sorry, This isdriving me crazy. Pangie

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/27/2023 2:05:00 PM

Ha that’s how sexy señoritas work, here one second gone the next, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/27/2023 1:39:00 PM

A creative write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away...................

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/27/2023 1:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Paula, you’re always so encouraging with comments, I’m delighted you enjoyed this one, take care cheers David

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/27/2023 12:44:00 PM

David I am an avid proponent of outside the box poetry and this certainly qualifies. Looking deeper is (IMO) what makes a poet better. A winner in my book.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/27/2023 12:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Daniel, I’ll never be a winner for extravagant poetic language, but I do try think outside the box and hopefully bring others for an abstract ride, even if it’s just down a cul de sac, cheers David