John Michaels Poet Haiku

Cuckoo - B

invasion
descendants deposed
cunning cuckoo

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(c) John C Michaels, February 2017

I've posted two Haiku variants on the same theme: one is the traditional 5-7-5 form ("Cuckoo - A") and the other is me branching out to try a more contemporary style ("Cuckoo - B").  I hope you like them both.

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Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2017 at 7:04 PM Great to see you tried contemporary. Let me see how it stacks up to the other version now. John Michaels February 25, 2017 at 4:40 AM Thanks for suggesting it... glad you like this one.