DENIS GARRISON the two line guru for you ..some of my examples
Shrieks of seagulls die on the breeze; Childhood ebbs away on sunlit seas. The stream where pooh sticks once were raced now flows into memory's embrace Flowers of beauty with the heart festoon the gestures we impart Flowers of beauty with the heart festoon the gestures we impart Sunset peeping under a cloud cloaks the landscape in a scarlet shroud
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