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Crystalline Tears

Sky opens up now Wildly iridescent flow Crying rainbows fall

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2011 11:25:00 AM

a melody of spontaneity flowing efortlessly, tim.. come join my contest... :) hugggs, nette

Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/4/2011 11:25:00 AM

*effortlessly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2011 9:11:00 AM

Great descriptive Haiku..Enjoyed reading this morn..Glad that my short poem about October made you think and work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/30/2011 12:20:00 AM

Crying rainbows.... the image is sudden deep... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Emma Mantle

Date: 8/29/2011 5:01:00 AM

Love the picture here, so beautiful. Title sums it up. Best wishes Em :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 9:10:00 PM

How lovely this is!