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Crystalline

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                                            translucent foliage

                                     golden yellow leaves, shimmer

                                             bellowing autumn

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Marty Owens

April 16, 2010 at 10:46 PM

Congratulations on your first place win...This is a beautiful Haiku...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2010 at 1:27 PM

Cool, Mitch!! congratulations1

April 16, 2010 at 10:05 AM

I liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on your first place finish in Raul's contest. Enjoy your big honor! Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 16, 2010 at 5:03 AM

Congrats Mitch on your 1st place win in Raul's contest.. what an excellent Haiku and well deserved first place my friend.. enjoy your victory lap..luv.. "Sweetheart"..and thankxxx for your congrats on my 10th place too...luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 16, 2010 at 3:51 AM

Hi Mitch! Super congrats on your 1st place win with this beautiful haiku--your title alone is a winner :) and yup I can totally relate with it being past 3am and still being on the Soup, it's pretty addictive :) go catch some zzz's now :) over here, it's just time for dinner...congrats again!