Crystal White

As the sun goes to sleep,                                                                                            the heavens turn into a deep velvety night.                                                                    I search the shinning stars,                                                                                        both near and far.                                                                                                            I am looking for one special star,                                                                                one I can call my own.                                                                                                  The universe is vast,                                                                                                      10,000 stars for all to see.                                                                                                I am looking for just one star,                                                                                       just one for little old me.                                                                                                  I find one on the edge of the velvety sky,                                                                        it has no name.                                                                                                        Bright and shining,                                                                                               glistening like a diamond in the sky.                                                                               I will adopt you for me,                                                                                               Crystal White will be your name.                                                                             Tomorrow I will file the papers,                                                                                 then you will be all mine.

Date Written: 11/8/2020
3 Place   There is a star with my name on it Contest Judged:11/12/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:46 PM
such a cute idea, naming it for yourself. It's a lovely name too, Congrats in the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Thanks, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It was an honor to have a win. Have a wonderful day writing away.................
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 10:24 AM
Congrats Paula on your win in Silent's contest with this fine poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day writing away..............
Ashley Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 6:26 PM
I adore the spirit of your beautiful poem, Paula. That's a lucky star, indeed! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and kind words. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day..............
Sands Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 2:19 PM
I love this. Congratulations for your win Paula :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day...................
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on your placement..
Goldsmith Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. I enjoyed writing this for your contest. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day writing away....................
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