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Crystal White

As the sun goes to sleep, the heavens turn into a deep velvety night. I search the shinning stars, both near and far. I am looking for one special star, one I can call my own. The universe is vast, 10,000 stars for all to see. I am looking for just one star, just one for little old me. I find one on the edge of the velvety sky, it has no name. Bright and shining, glistening like a diamond in the sky. I will adopt you for me, Crystal White will be your name. Tomorrow I will file the papers, then you will be all mine. Date Written: 11/8/2020 3 Place There is a star with my name on it Contest Judged:11/12/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 11/13/2020 6:46:00 PM
such a cute idea, naming it for yourself. It's a lovely name too, Congrats in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It was an honor to have a win. Have a wonderful day writing away.................
Date: 11/13/2020 10:24:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your win in Silent's contest with this fine poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2020 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day writing away..............
Date: 11/12/2020 6:26:00 PM
I adore the spirit of your beautiful poem, Paula. That's a lucky star, indeed! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/13/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and kind words. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day..............
Date: 11/12/2020 2:19:00 PM
I love this. Congratulations for your win Paula :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/13/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day...................
Date: 11/12/2020 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. I enjoyed writing this for your contest. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy our day writing away....................

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