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Crystal Death 2k11

Addiction, reality, non-fiction. All is dark, out of the shadows, eyes of a Great White shark; Blank stares beyond glass windows. Syringes, false smiles, glass vials. Void laughs harkend therein the presence of death; 'Crystal Death'! Intoxicating moments illy starkened. Much dysfunction, such malfunction thereof mortal robots. Of flesh and of mind -- so rots mortal robots. A touch of self-destruction!

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/21/2011 10:05:00 PM

Wow! Your verse takes us to dark place of an addicted mind. An amazing write on a sad stae all too common.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Anthony

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 5/16/2011 5:22:00 PM

Thanks to all of the poets whom have taken the time to simply read, perhaps rate and comment on this write here. A fellow poet, - Anthony Owen Mitchell Jr.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 1:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write this week Anthony. Love, Carol

Red Fiery

Date: 5/15/2011 4:48:00 PM

Syringes, false smiles, glass viles. Void laughs harkend therein the presence of death; 'Crystal Death'! Intoxicating moments illy starkened. .........................wonderful Anthony. Your poems are beyond imagination. GREAT....I wish I could paint so beautifully the way you have done justice to your works. Where do u live ?

Red Fiery
Date: 5/16/2011 6:20:00 PM

kindly check ur soup mails...i hope u have not turned it off......I am scared !

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
Date: 5/16/2011 5:30:00 PM

The beauteous state of Oregon my friend.

Michelle Campbell

Date: 5/15/2011 4:30:00 PM

Thank you for commenting on my poem. Very powerful !

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/13/2011 2:33:00 PM

Anthony- This is a psychological thriller-inside the mind of the user. NIce one, my friend. Check out ..vials..dysfunction. Possible typos. HIgh five for an amazing angle to this sad topic. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 10:32:00 AM

Anthony, the great white line was my favorite way to see what you are portraying here.... no matter how you describe it,,, its a terrible way to suffer ,, and one ugly way to live tragically.. thanks for sharing... I have much more opinions on her... but I'll keep it simple... i truly enjoyed this poem,,, adding this to my favorite poems... take care,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/13/2011 10:33:00 AM

i meant on here not her... bye..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2011 9:02:00 AM

Police in Florida say crystal meth is the rage with young people now because they can purchase products to "cook" it legally. The disfunction and self-destruction of the drug is described vividly in your poem, Anthony. Some say it's as dangerous as heroin. Very powerful write! Best wishes, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/12/2011 5:47:00 PM

Awesome and intriguing write, Anthony

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2011 5:33:00 PM

So enjoyed reading this most creative write tonight .. impressed by your parallels in this piece luv.. awesome..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/12/2011 5:28:00 PM

sounds like a 60's bad trip [sigh] I know my body seems to be wearing out, the mind and body have had a parting of thr way? Hope you feel better. Light & Love