Crystal City

Little white specks 
Spiral downward 
From a threatening sky
Swirling and Glistening
It's a crystal city
Little white specks 
Continue to fall
Finally landing
Piling on top of each other
Forming little crystal mounds
Little white specks
Looking so beautiful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 6, 2009 at 2:02 PM
It's enchanting to watch the snow fall. I could watch it for hours! Thank you for this lovely poem. And thank you for you lovely comment on my new poem Acceptance. It's hard enough being a kid without other kids poking fun.. If you like that, you should read my poem Last in Line...it's an extended version.
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