Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Rhyme

Crystal Blues

Wise crystal blues speak sailor's tales. 
Fragile hearts heal, unsure from shore -
once battered at sea, restless to love,
once forgotten on cold ocean floor.      

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 6/13/15
for Nette's Through Your Eyes Contest
Visual #4, 25 words

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Eve Roper July 5, 2015 at 1:34 PM Rhonda. Wonderful write a 7, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve O:-)

Ayesha Karim June 30, 2015 at 5:39 PM This is a really good poem. I love the title too!

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2015 at 9:31 PM Love how you put into this one images from the sea. Big congrats on your win, sweet friend

Skat A June 22, 2015 at 4:40 PM Rhonda:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2015 at 3:46 PM Nice win... PD

Paul Callus June 22, 2015 at 11:25 AM Lovely rhyme for crystal blues, Rhonda! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 2:54 AM nicely portrayed Rhonda congrats on placing hugs

Francine Roberts June 21, 2015 at 9:10 PM lovely rhyme, many congrats on your win Rhonda

Jan Allison June 21, 2015 at 3:32 PM Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley June 13, 2015 at 7:51 PM Super 7 my friend. I wrote my poem on visual number 4 too. Goooooooooood luck in the contest, this is a gem..

Francine Roberts June 13, 2015 at 3:07 PM beautiful, best of luck in nette's contest

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 8:24 AM beautifully penned Rhonda - you need to put the number of words used too:-) hugs jan xx 7 Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 9:42 AM So easy to miss something off the rules :-) hugs Jan xx Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 13, 2015 at 9:41 AM Thanks for catching it, Jan. Everything's been a rush for me lately! Hugs, R