Cryptic Tableau

CRYPTIC TABLEAU

groaning of the keys

     sharp tones of the crypt

phantom’s masterpiece

     sad and melodic

dauntless pendulum

     calling forth his bride

10/30/2017
TABLEAU PRINTS CONTEST
Visual #1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:49 PM
I loved the interpretation of the image Kim it was so creative!! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 3:44 PM
a different angle on the theme, kim... very creative: thanks for joining and sweet congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thank you Nette! Squeezy hug :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:41 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thanks Subimal!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Thanks Eve! xx
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Awesome and spooky, Kim. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Thanks Sandra!
May Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 5:08 PM
Great write Kim..Congrats on your win..
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Thanks Joe!
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:58 PM
I really like that ending! Cleverly done, Kim. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Michaels Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Oooh... a spooky little number! Really liked your interpretation of the them, Kim - congrats on your win. Regards, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thanks John!
Gauthier Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 5:33 PM
AWESOME poem... love the eerie powerful imagery. Bravo!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:17 PM
Thanks so much, Line :)
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Feel the call in your write..best for a win!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
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