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Cryptic

cryptic black
glaring onyx of her eyes
~ cold and heartless



AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 10:22 PM
Heartlessness comes in many forms, this surely being one of them. Kudos, Gershon (Soup mail, please)
Babbit Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 7:07 PM
Ouch!
Bauer Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 6:54 PM
this poem fits the picture perfectly, line!
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