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Crying Sorrow

There is nothing left in my life I start to cry as I grab my knife I hate the world and my mind Afraid that I will get left behind I sit in the shadow when I feel cold Killing myself and losing my soul No one can save me They never cared Losing blood I'm very scared Starting to fade and losing the fight I cry on this cold and lonely night...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 12:15:00 PM
Dude that is so awesomely dark I <3 it and yea a lot of people feel that way including me.....<3 Cilla Jaye.....P.S Keep writing I love your poems!!!!!
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Date: 9/27/2009 4:48:00 PM
Remember..you are not sure if there will be less pain after death? OR that we might not have to just keep trying again...reincarnated till we get it "right" for ourselves in our own minds....don't despair you can always help others even when we can't help ourselves and then things look brighter. HUGS! Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:34:00 PM
Interesting topic here. Keep writing. Sara P.S. I do hope that it is a topic about people that use cutting to relieve anxiety.
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