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Crying For Tears

If these thoughts are real then they must be uncharacteristic of normal... A balance of abnormal that is both astringent and self absorbing. In abstinence they become relentless in their pursuit (until) the remaining raw edges of hope surrenders to un-forgiveness. Crying for tears, an emollient for despair. ps: not so sure just where this came from of if it even makes sense.just wrote it down in a flash.

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Date: 3/26/2016 9:27:00 PM
Gary, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:52:00 PM
GARY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:51:00 AM
What a beautiful afternoon I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this afternoon Gary. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/5/2011 8:23:00 AM
great fragmentation of a poem ready to give birth, gary... the confusion of clering one's thoughts come through... nice! :) huggs, nette
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