Crying

my heart cry when my face frowns because of the pain in my eyes

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/4/2010 6:47:00 AM

This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Makyia. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/3/2010 12:48:00 PM

cheer up!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2010 10:11:00 AM

i think i understand... well this is one way i can put it. the pain in your eyes could be the sight on your significant other with and other girl, the face frowns at the sight, and the heart cries enduring the pain??, enjoyed the read

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2010 10:08:00 AM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..My heart cries a good bit...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara