Crying

my heart cry
when my face frowns 
because of the pain in my eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 6:47 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Makyia. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2010 at 12:48 PM
cheer up!
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June 3, 2010 at 10:11 AM
i think i understand... well this is one way i can put it. the pain in your eyes could be the sight on your significant other with and other girl, the face frowns at the sight, and the heart cries enduring the pain??, enjoyed the read
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..My heart cries a good bit...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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