Cry Not For Me

Cry not for me as night slips...my ashes wander among herbs and moonlight.



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Singled Out Contest of Debbie
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 11, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Crying.......:(
Babcock Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 1:34 PM
congrats on your win. Well done. love phyl
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Singled Out" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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October 7, 2012 at 9:29 AM
Nette,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debbie's "Singled Out" awesome contest. Enjoy your day, always~ PD
Grisetti Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Another beauty, Nette. COngratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:52 PM
I knew this one would do well. Glad to share fourth spot with you, Nette. Big congrats.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 5:29 PM
A lovely thought and Monoku. My mother's ashes are sprinkled about a mountain side overlooking the sea. She would have loved the place I chose. Congratulations on your win Nette!
Arowolo Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 4:51 PM
Splendid and wonderful piece,Nette...Good job..Congratulations on your superb win...
Guzzi Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Thanks nette lovely write. Please do try my new contest for forms of 2 lines only. Congrad's Light & Love
O'Leary Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Very nice...Congrats on your placement... Terry
Sweetheart Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 8:55 AM
SPECTACULAR LINE NETTE LUV .. LILTING AND FLOWING WITH DRAMATIC TOUCH .. WINNING WISHES MY FRIEND ..LUV ..
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October 5, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Nette, good luck in the contest, enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA
Williams Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:30 PM
Nette, just excellent...David
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 12:46 PM
WOW, this is superb!!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Winner for sure..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I am still not feeling my best..Sara
Sivey Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 11:48 AM
What a fabulously developed write my friend! What powerful words you exude here Nette! I love this ingenious poem, there is a lot of truth to it, we don't want our loved ones to cry for us after we are gone...as we are benefiting nature at that point! This is a spectacular write, one of true beauty! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Babcock Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 11:27 AM
A beautiful line for the contest Nette. love phyl
Horsman Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:55 AM
nette this is beautiful,
Hu Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:37 AM
an intense one
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October 5, 2012 at 4:32 AM
Ooooh!!! Very touching. That one line took me to another place.....good luck in the contest.
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