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Cry Me a River

All that we've been through, all you've put me through, you can cry me a river. All the lies you told and broken promises, you can cry me a river. All the hanging out late, just cry me a river. I just don't understand why i put up with all of this, i suppose its due to me loving you. However, as they say, you don't always have to be with the person you love, especially when they don't love you back. So as you cry me this river, think about how far i am up the stream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/26/2009 6:18:00 PM
ask me how to do soupmail. jhl
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:17:00 PM
the title caught me. and t5hen the words then the feelings. great last line, John H Loving III
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Date: 8/26/2009 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Moses
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Date: 8/12/2009 11:51:00 AM
Wisdom speaks, as tho wisdom is, as wisdom should, God bless Sabrina, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 8/10/2009 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Jen and Christopher!
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Date: 8/10/2009 10:17:00 AM
This is beautiful and the last line is great..love how you detailed this write..wonderful.
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:11:00 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry SabrinaLove, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 9:20:00 AM
L-O-V-E the last line. Strong poem, I see the truth in every line. I like the river theme, I guess I never thought about it that way, I always say just another fish in the sea. I Like this a lot! Thanks for the comment. ~Jen~
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:26:00 PM
Thanks Adam!
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Jayne!...Sabrina
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:13:00 PM
Great poem
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:07:00 PM
Powerful writing this .. cry me a river think about how far I am up the stream ... thats powerful in itself ... Love Jayne x x
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