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Cry In the Rain

Go cry in the rain Go live out that cliche Show the world your pain Take a minute to pray Bloodshot your eyes Nobody hears your cries Believe those lies You cry so unattractively You're breathing so hard Change your mood drastically Confuse the dead Smile instead Look for the good times ahead Turn it around Show the world your pain Get off the ground Cry in the rain

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The Situation

Date: 5/9/2012 2:57:00 PM

crying is healthy. and shorten the greiving time.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2012 7:38:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Lily. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 5/9/2012 4:55:00 AM

Nice but don't cry yaar...it would be crazy..y..y.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2012 2:24:00 AM

Yes Lily, look for the good times - do not cry in the rain. - well written, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/8/2012 9:12:00 PM

HI; I like this poem. Some years ago I wrote a poem called Rain. It was my first poem that I sent in and it got accepted. In my poem I mention crying in the rain. That's where we can do our best crying. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla