Crux of the Heart

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Poetic Form: Grook
Inspired: 2024 January 28
Image: N/A

Fact, real, and yes, al/l - so true, can it turn, be like, misconstrue, maybe like this, one, three, two, be some topic of points of view, a dream or goal still comes true, affair's subjective of who's who.

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/28/2024 11:02:00 AM

Living now in an era where we cant really tell what is what and who is who, cant differentiate whats real, as everyones embracing and adjusting to the artificial intelligence that seems to flicker brighter in some eyes, although lacks depth. I thought of that as i read this dear hilo. Pleasure reading your work. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/28/2024 11:16:00 AM

At times a thought flickers and I get the mouse that goes on high octane, so I record on my iPhone. The guys are younger and quick with the keyboard, and the ladies are older--I need to remind myself that they're all nurses, --not secretaries. Lol, I'm getting giddy--thanks Ink Empress, input and all. Aloha, William