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Crusted Stones

Crusted Stones They rest in the empty silence silence attending midnight songs songs whispering to lovers tears tears long dried upon crusted stones visual #3 John G. Lawless submitted to – Four Lines Only – poetry contest 6/7/2015

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/14/2015 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations John well done..'

Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 7:46:00 PM

John, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2015 6:17:00 PM

Great work, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2015 3:17:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 6/12/2015 4:39:00 AM

Evocative... Julia, :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2015 3:42:00 PM

I just really love all the ones I am seeing based on the tomb stones. This is GREAT!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/8/2015 2:05:00 AM

John just awesome... :) i love you putting your end words as beginning of the succeeding line the effect is wow! ~olive eloisa

Julia Ward
Date: 6/12/2015 4:41:00 AM

The contest was set up like that! We had to put end words as the beginning of the succeeding line.

Mark Trichet

Date: 6/7/2015 5:34:00 PM

Nailed it John! Brilliant verse that captures it all. Loved the last line, GL

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/7/2015 4:52:00 PM

Oh what a vivid write, I don't need a picture to see this clearly, nicely done John :)

Cupids Arrow

Date: 6/7/2015 9:01:00 AM

Oh those crusted stones..they leave a mark upon our hearts.So much said in few,even with silence,so much is said..Excellent !

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2015 8:21:00 AM

brilliant imagery I love your interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7