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F ragile hearts find R ivers of tears A llow source of pain G ain release from deep I nside where it remains. L ike a dam that allows E scape of overflow. H earts that have suffered E normous hurts. A re fragile beyond repair. R efusing to repeat mistakes. T errified of trusting again. S uch a crying shame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/24/2016 4:44:00 PM
Nice acrostic, for some reason reminded me the movie the "crying game"
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/24/2016 5:22:00 PM
Directed by our very own Neil Jordan?
Date: 10/24/2016 8:18:00 AM
Your last line was my favourite, great write, deep thought involved. Please review my latest poems and let me know what you think! Cheers
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/24/2016 10:16:00 AM
Indeed I will Hani, although I am far from quailfied to judge. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
Date: 10/24/2016 7:59:00 AM
Wonderful acrostic Jean. You made it look easy. Good luck!
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/24/2016 8:06:00 AM
I just put the capitol letters down first Daniel, then jump on for the ride.
Date: 10/24/2016 7:18:00 AM
- Touching and beautiful, Jean - Best wishes for a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/24/2016 7:57:00 AM
Same to you Anne-Lise. Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs