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~ Hey, Karin - returning your note ~ Perhaps I'm not your type, alas But I'm behind you, here in class Adoring each and every thing you do The way you talk, so soft, yet clear And tuck the tresses 'hind your ear (The hair I'd love to run my fingers thru) ... I love the way you tilt your hip And always bite your bottom lip Whene'er you get excited or annoyed The way you pass me little notes Crimped origami birds and boats Advising me which girls I should avoid ... For me it's not the threads or bling It's each sweet, steamy little thing That other guys don't care about at all And yet, if added, two-plus-two They make for one amazing YOU (The enigmatic YOU I'd love to call) ... You might not know me very well A semester - long enough to tell I'm apt to always treat you with respect You're quite romantic, just like me And know that love can someday be As faithful as two hearts can thus affect ... So, if I may, I'll start this task As rhyme and meter, meant to ask If you might give us just an evening each? Perhaps a steak house, Japanese A theater then - that new release And then a peaceful walk along the beach ... The stroll may seem a bit too soon But sad to waste that lovely moon And what romance it weaves, no one can tell I hope you'll flip this page and write You'd love to date me, (Friday night) But quickly now, before they ring ... The bell! ~ 1st Place ~ in the "School Time Crush" Poetry Contest, Faraz Ajmal, Judge & Sponsor. ~ This poem did NOT place ~ in the "Crushed" Poetry Contest, Anthony Biaanco, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/11/2019 4:44:00 PM
A special delight to read, especially because it is real. This poem is so brilliantly written I see why it is a number one winner! Congratulations Greg! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/12/2019 3:56:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Connie, I'm so happy you enjoyed this one - it was fun, especially the rhyme scheme! Blessings, my good friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/9/2019 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Greg. Eve ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/12/2019 3:54:00 AM
That's very kind, Eve, thank you my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/9/2019 3:19:00 PM
Perfecto!! Congrats on top win, Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/12/2019 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! :-) <3
Date: 3/9/2019 12:41:00 PM
I fell in love with this poem the moment I read it, it was absolutely a masterpiece and truly a joy to read, many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/12/2019 3:54:00 AM
I am so honored, Faraz, and humbled to be on a list with so many wonderful poets! This truly made my day, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem ... this was a fun project, and brought back many great memories. Blessings and thanks to you! :-)
Date: 2/19/2019 11:39:00 AM
The flow glows...the memories sing and I applaud!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2019 3:03:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Chuck, I greatly appreciate it, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/19/2019 7:47:00 AM
The way you pass me little notes/Crimped origami birds and boats...love it! Always the romantic. So did she answer before the bell...putting on your best salesman tactics. Sounds like high pressure...lol
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2019 3:01:00 PM
LOL - Yes, it turned out quite well, Kim! Thank you so much for your comment, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/19/2019 7:02:00 AM
Oh, the nervous brave tenderness of a crush. I enjoyed this! FAV
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2019 2:59:00 PM
Many thanks to you, PS, I greatly appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 2/19/2019 4:53:00 AM
Love it. It brings back memories as though just yesterday.”A Rare Beauty” I called her. But only in my mind- that’s as far as it got. Thank you for this .
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/19/2019 6:32:00 AM
You are very welcome, My Good Friend, and I thank you so kindly for the wonderful comments ... seems those special ones burn into us like phosphorous, and never relent. As much as the heart can ache, I think it's important to not always just remember, but always FEEL ... what we felt then. Blessings, Peter! :-)

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